Hi Vili thank you for uploading your reading log. Your presentation is eye catching and your summary gives just enough detail to interest your reader. However you are not following my feedback with regards to adding in evidence (examples from the text) to back up your opinions. With text to self you need to explain why your stepping on a crab has anything to do with this text. Your text to text you need to say that you make connection between this book and the movie Jaws because there is a shark in both that attacks the main characters in both the movie and book. With your text to the world you need to say that in the book the character gets stranded on an island this reminds you of the time where on TV you saw a true story about a guy getting stranding. Please add in this information in your next reading log.
Hi Vili thank you for finishing off your reading log. Next time can you make sure there are capitals in the correct places as well as make sure you are adding evidence to back up your statements. We discussed how to use evidence in class on Monday, in your next reading log I will expect to see this starting to happen.
Hi Vili it is great to see you using the wiki to publish your reading logs. I was very pleased with your presentation, great use of colour and text. Next time it would be great if you could check your your work before publishing and if you could put a little more detail into your personal response to the text.
Hi Vili thank you for uploading your reading log. Your presentation is eye catching and your summary gives just enough detail to interest your reader. However you are not following my feedback with regards to adding in evidence (examples from the text) to back up your opinions. With text to self you need to explain why your stepping on a crab has anything to do with this text. Your text to text you need to say that you make connection between this book and the movie Jaws because there is a shark in both that attacks the main characters in both the movie and book. With your text to the world you need to say that in the book the character gets stranded on an island this reminds you of the time where on TV you saw a true story about a guy getting stranding. Please add in this information in your next reading log.
Hi Vili thank you for finishing off your reading log. Next time can you make sure there are capitals in the correct places as well as make sure you are adding evidence to back up your statements. We discussed how to use evidence in class on Monday, in your next reading log I will expect to see this starting to happen.
Hi Vili it is great to see you using the wiki to publish your reading logs. I was very pleased with your presentation, great use of colour and text. Next time it would be great if you could check your your work before publishing and if you could put a little more detail into your personal response to the text.